Lopaka had probably the largest fit of laughter ever recorded on the Laug-hter (Richt-laugh? Richter scale for laughter, you get the point), slapping the side of the couch as Koa laughed to the point of tears and Wade went even further into questioning his life decisions.

"IT'S GONNA HAPPEN! You ...

Lopaka dramatically slumped in his chair when Koa pat his shoulder, playing up the just so horrible idea of Miz losing. You could almost hear an audible womp.

"I'm so sad. I'm going to be sad foreeeeeeveeeer!" He's going to forget about this in, like, a minute.

Lopaka re-entered the conversation ...

[LILLIANA MONROE: PREGAME- START.]

Usually, Lilliana wouldn’t be up until around midnight. She knows her body well, and that comes with the knowledge that she is not a happy camper if she wakes up too early. Luckily, today was Saturday (about to be Sunday), so that was far from a worry for her ...

p….please….i edited it…let me in..

okay....now I am POSITIVE that I have everything....please let me out

You ever see something on TV, and then have to sit in silence in order to consume everything that just happened? Yeah, that's NOT usually what Lopaka feels after watching a Royal Rumble, but that all seemed to come to a halt with this specific one. Miz got out, that IShowSpeed guy was around for ...

ATTEMPT #5....SET ME FREE

Lopaka stuck his tongue out, clearly attempting to tease the others about agreeing on one lane

“Y’all need to branch out and have fun with it! The unexpected outcomes are always kickass, y’know? Punk can wait a lil’ longer, he’s waited this long!”

Lopaka’s eyes trailed back to the mockup Royal ...

THEEE EBONY LISABETH-BROOKE

Kiandra Davis- when I learned of Ebony’s identity I had to run here immediately because the POTENTIAL I SEE IN THESE TWO?? Transgender females, both who love fashion, and could easily be connected through someone like Sylvie or something. They’re also both EXTREMELY ...

Lopaka had gotten a plate full of Thomas' pizza rolls (he already loves the dude because of this alone), pretzels, and he got the first selection of his donuts because, y'know, he BOUGHT them! He thought that was fair.

He flopped down on the left side of the couch, legs hanging off of the side as ...

should be all fixed!

ATTEMPT #3!! another major rewrite so I'm really sorry for putting you through this, BUT I ACTUALLY LIKE HER CHARACTER NOW!!! PLEASE AGREE WITH ME!!!

also just want to say like ty so much for all of these critiques bc you really helped me remake who i want her to be and it has opened a LOT up for me

“Couldn’t miss this for anything, bro!” Lopaka happily returned the fist bump to Koa, before shuffling inside and finding the snack table. His precious donuts were saved, and now sitting in an empty spot on the corner of the table.

He returned to the group, arms behind his head as he went to re-tie ...

“ WAAAAAAAIT! HOLD THE DOOOOOOOR!”

(Lopaka Akana continued from Tutoring W/Meghan Roberts )

Lopaka, like Wade, didn’t live particularly far from Koa. It wasn’t as close, so he had left a bit earlier to make it with plenty of time. He didn’t know why he came up with that idea, as he usually drives ...