Johnny seemed to be rustier than he claimed. The choice to demonstrate his prowess with Smoke on the Water showed a lack of confidence in his abilities. The actual playing itself was wobbly too, but Charlie Girl could forgive that. He wasn't trying to phone it in or play it off, he was owning it ...

Alright, I think we're pretty close, just a few small bits to fix up and a couple of parts to expand upon but I think Josie is nearly there and ready to go into pregame. So let's not waste time and take a look at what we have to fix up.

Eric and Gertrude first met approximately thirty years ago in ...

Hi Deblod! Joanne is looking better than she was but still needs some edits before she'll be eligible for pregame. So let's go hit up these changes.

She is top-heavy and busty in terms of her body physique. You don't need to put body here, physique is fine by itself.

She wears expensive jewelry ...

"No, you can stay and keep playing," Charlie Girl said with a wave of her hand, her head still resting on the doorframe. "I didn't come here to kick you out...well I did, but that was when it was Thursday, not like you know, today, Wednesday."

A smooth explanation that certainly left no doubts as ...

Alright, Josie is looking better but we still have some edits before she'll be ready to go, it's mainly clarificationa and tidying up details so it hopefully shouldn't be too much work for you. But let's dive in!

usually being found with an unzipped jacket, T-Shirts and denim shorts. Found in ...

Hi Jacob! I'll be critiquing Josie for you and she's off to a good start but is going to need some more work before she'll be able to be accepted into the pregame. The main thing you need is expansion and more detail, in addition to the critiques below I would also advise that you go through the ...

"No, it's my day since it's Thursday."

Charlie Girl froze momentarily as if someone had pressed pause on the tape. Abby passed her and left the room as she stood thinking. It was Thursday, right? She had been sure it was...no it was, it totally was.

But, one quick look at her phone couldn't hurt ...

((Charlie Girl continued from Chlorine ))

If there was one main criticism that a student could have about the practice rooms, recording studios, and other general music spaces within Southwest Red Rock it would have been that they could have pushed the boat out a little more with them. They weren ...

Charlie Girl was in the middle of a turn when the calm waters of the pool turned into a tidal wave of chlorinated swash, smashing her directly in the face as a large body landed beside her. Overtaken by a cough fit as her body attempted to rid itself of an unwanted drink, Charlie Girl didn't realise ...

Almost got everything, you just missed out Alejandros weight, add that in quick and he's in!

There was a steady hum of noise from the occupants of The Cell, a buzz reminiscent of bees in a hive. They were likely all as warm as working bees would have been, too. The Cell being what it was—and that was a venue located down a graffitied set of stairs underneath another altogether separate ...