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by Latin For Dragula
Wed May 26, 2021 12:46 am
Forum: Approved Characters
Topic: Lorenzo/a "Ren" Araya
Replies: 9
Views: 452

Re: Lorenzo/a "Ren" Araya

Hello Yona! I'm Paige, I'll be handling Ren's critique. They're temporarily DENIED pending the following edits. However, they mistakenly brought her to an anger management class, which failed to address their issues, and they came out of the class that summer feeling even worse than before. The bold...
by Latin For Dragula
Sun Apr 25, 2021 1:56 pm
Forum: Approved Characters
Topic: Kyoto Aizawa
Replies: 5
Views: 492

Re: Kyoto Aizawa

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by Latin For Dragula
Sun Apr 25, 2021 1:49 pm
Forum: Approved Characters
Topic: Ellis Wheaton
Replies: 3
Views: 238

Re: Ellis Wheaton

APPROVED
by Latin For Dragula
Sat Apr 10, 2021 7:33 pm
Forum: Approved Characters
Topic: Kyoto Aizawa
Replies: 5
Views: 492

Re: Kyoto Aizawa

Hello again! Kyoto is looking much improved though I still have a few concerns that leave him temporarily DENIED , primarily with the relationships you have added on this second pass. The timeline feels unclear on fostering to Kyoto's poor experiences with Stephen and Tristana to him becoming more c...
by Latin For Dragula
Thu Apr 08, 2021 11:30 am
Forum: Approved Characters
Topic: Timothy Adams
Replies: 5
Views: 344

Re: Timothy Adams

APPROVED
by Latin For Dragula
Wed Apr 07, 2021 10:43 pm
Forum: Approved Characters
Topic: Timothy Adams
Replies: 5
Views: 344

Re: Timothy Adams

Timothy is looking pretty close! I have just a couple concerns left that leave him temporarily DENIED . He was open about his opinions on this at school which would get him in arguments with other students that sometimes became physical, but not at his part. Earning him reprimands and tongue lashing...
by Latin For Dragula
Sun Apr 04, 2021 3:17 am
Forum: Approved Characters
Topic: Ellis Wheaton
Replies: 3
Views: 238

Re: Ellis Wheaton

Howdy Laurels! Ellis is off to a good start but I have a few clarifying questions that leave him temporarily DENIED . Mainly I'm curious about the arc of Ellis deciding that his father and brothers are a toxic influence. How does this come about? You note that his primary coping mechanism with class...
by Latin For Dragula
Sun Apr 04, 2021 1:32 am
Forum: Approved Characters
Topic: Robin Valenti
Replies: 5
Views: 366

Re: Robin Valenti

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by Latin For Dragula
Sun Apr 04, 2021 12:11 am
Forum: Approved Characters
Topic: Dominiqua Ashmore
Replies: 5
Views: 326

Re: Dominiqua Ashmore

Hello Ryuki! Apologies, but before we get to critiquing Dominiqua please make sure she adheres to the profile template . Currently there is a paragraph break between her Advantages and Disadvantages sections. These two sections should be collapsed together. Post here when you have updated her profil...
by Latin For Dragula
Sun Apr 04, 2021 12:07 am
Forum: Approved Characters
Topic: Robin Valenti
Replies: 5
Views: 366

Re: Robin Valenti

I think Robin is almost there now! He is temporarily DENIED pending one small change: As has been proven during his time at John Endecott, dropping this act is unlikely to solve these problems, as most of his classmates are unconvinced that it is an act in the slightest , and those that are persuade...
by Latin For Dragula
Sat Apr 03, 2021 11:43 pm
Forum: Approved Characters
Topic: Jessica Romero
Replies: 3
Views: 675

Re: Jessica Romero

APPROVED
by Latin For Dragula
Sat Apr 03, 2021 7:59 pm
Forum: Approved Characters
Topic: Jessica Romero
Replies: 3
Views: 675

Re: Jessica Romero

Hello Deamon! Jessica looks great but she is temporarily DENIED given: Hobbies and Interests: Climbing, volleyball, hiking, ecology, skateboarding, annoying that bitch Mallory As valid a hobby as this seems from the context provided, it doesn't fit with the neutral tone we aim for in profiles and wi...
by Latin For Dragula
Sat Apr 03, 2021 6:14 pm
Forum: Approved Characters
Topic: Timothy Adams
Replies: 5
Views: 344

Re: Timothy Adams

Hey Ohm! Timothy is off to a great start but I have a couple of small concerns that leave him temporarily DENIED . How politically active is Timothy? Does he just get into arguments or is he an active demonstrator, campaigner, etc.? Massachusetts is a fairly progressive area and the only strong beli...
by Latin For Dragula
Sat Apr 03, 2021 4:57 pm
Forum: Approved Characters
Topic: Kyoto Aizawa
Replies: 5
Views: 492

Re: Kyoto Aizawa

Hello AnimeNerd! I'm Paige and I'll be critiquing Kyoto for pregame. On this pass he's temporarily DENIED with the following notes: It’s clear to anyone that sees him that he’s worked for years to achieve his muscular form. His eyebrows are bushy, and there’s a notable break on his right eyebrow, a ...

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