Hey kid, want a critique? (V7 Edition)

[Catche Jagger]

Greetings, fellas!

I am, indeed, that guy. I was just boppin around and thought I might take the occasion of my schedule lightening up a bit to offer my services a critique-er in order to catch up on some of the parts of V7 that I missed (notably most of pregame) and to take the time and read certain threads through a more deliberate lens than I may have upon first glance.

I don't really have a specific gimmick as to how I'm handling my critiques beyond trying to lay them out as thoroughly and honestly as I can while hopefully maintaining a constructive tone. I might be a bit goofy with stuff, but rest assured, I am a complete genius who knows exactly what he is doing.

Two things to note before you start typing away to get your kids in the queue:

- For the time being, I will be focusing solely on v7 participants who have died. If there comes a point where I have read through all the dead kids (or at least the dead kids whose handlers are interested in critiques) at a given time, then I may move on to those still alive. Until we come to such a point, though, this policy stands.

- For now, I will be limiting the queue to five and will not be accepting any further requests until those five have been completed.

Queue Status: CLOSED

1) Danny Chamnanma (Melusine)
2) Philip Olivares (MurderWeasel)
3) Dante Valerio (Fenris)
4) Bree Jones (KamiKaze)
5) Mikki Swift (Brackie)

[Melusine]

sure do danny

[Grand Moff Hissa]

I'd love to hear your take on Phillip Olivares.

[Fenris]

hello sir i have a dante hes in my signature and stuff. hes a nice boy

[KamiKaze]

*unexpectedly drops a dead body on your lawn*

Note that I was barely active in pre-game, but there's still stuff worth looking at. : D

[Brackie]

hey I'd love some Mikki thots