Okay, removed the detail there. Corrected the past tense, clarified the details I missed. I am 100% sure I done everything

Meggy’s eyes dart around the various lights and colors inside the building, her smile growing ever more. All the overwhelming noises and lights with machines and games and the sound of people laughing. She looked at Willow and spoke more louder so she can be heard.

“I don’t know! Let’s just have ...

Okay deepest apologies there, for some reason it did not solve yet but I did that all again and fixed everything. Lemme know if anything else you spotted

Okay I am Sure I implemented everything you told me to. Here you go and if anything else pops up just let me know!!

Meggy eagerly bounced on her foot, waiting as they are last in que and stare at Willow with a toothy grin and then at the entrance “I’d love dance with you. Just name the time and place.” She winks and excitedly bounced as they are let in through the doors.

“Here we go!”

All instances of Copper have been changed to Cynthia! Anything else needs fixing and changing just lemme know!

“Well, I ain’t very good at the dancing games. Because I’m a terrible dancer. ” Meggy dropped an octave for comedic effect before giggling “But I enjoy a lotta games, really! I got into Red Dead Redemption and Grand Theft Auto, and of course, Mortal Kombatt!”

She smiled and brushed her hair back ...

Abby tilted her head upwards at David's question, turning towards the place that caught David's eyes as she slowly nodded.

"Oh, of course, I'm not stopping you from ordering coffee." She gave a soft smile "And yes, if they have anything sweet i'd appreciate it. Would you wish for me to pay for it ...

Okay I think this is everything you stated! I may have missed one thing or two but I did a lot of destructing and expanding and redoing a lot of things, so hopefully this will be better!

“Well, it can be that too.” Meggy gave and small smirk “But you know, I like I can just do something fun for a while!”

She gestured at the grey cube smack dab at the center “I always love arcades and video games stuff! My old town back in Massachusetts always had this nice retro arcade that I ...

BEEP. ABORT THE MISSION MEGGY. ABORT ABORT. TARGET HAS UPPED THE ANTE! GET OUTTA THER-

“Sure yeah!’ Mega gave a giggle as she opened the other car door, climbing out. She nudges the door shut with her hip as she cracks her back “This is gonna be a fun date, I can assure you!”

She twirls around ...

Meggy blushed slightly, crossing her arms at the remark “Easy on the remarks Willow or I’d have to write you up for conduct.” She smirks a bit adjusting her seat back and giving a wink as she looked out the window.

“And plus, I like all songs. And anything coming from you would be like an angelic ...

Meghan listened to Willow talk, a hand on her head as she leaned against the door. She seemed interested, she’s a talented musician? Ooo-lalaaaa

“ Wellll , if this date goes well you might have to show me those skills.” She flirted back a little, giggling and crossing her legs “A woman like me ...

“Yeah….yeah…”

He nodded for a few moments, staring off into the distance before looking at Emma.

“Bye.”

Bisette immediately turned and walked back to his car, entering in and, without another word to her, drove off,

((Chester bus setter continues elsewhere))

“Uhhh, no! I am not epileptic.” Meghan confirmed as she looked embarrassed “Mom is just, overprotective like that you know, especially after well uh, my dad and stuff and moving here.”

That much was true, considering Nancy has to juggle her daughter’s well being and keeping their small roof over ...