Should be taken care of! I don't think you need a changelog this time.

Should be good to go!

Changes:
- Fixed all the small issues.
- Added a bit about when she got her piercings to the paragraph discussing her change of appearance.
- Elaborated a tiny bit on why she likes playing guitar.
- Changed the wording around her Satanism to make it clearer.
- Added a bit ...

Heya Deamon. I don't think you need the spiel. Let's get into it.

frequently seen is exercise gear

In, not is.

Currently the main pair are wears are Air Jordan

Pair she wears.

her parents focus in the sister’s early years

Missing an apostrophe at the end of "parents".

The Hood parents ...

Heya Deamon. I've adjusted things per your post and our talk!

Change log:
- Dropped the brackets.
- Magdalene is now Mabel.
- Fixed the tense error.
- Elaborated on young Charity's rule-breaking.
- Beel's parents are less terrible (still bad).
- Young Charity is more secretive, even towards ...

Howdy Fenris. You know the drill, DENIED , etc. Hunter's looking great, with only a few small grammar errors that I'm worried about.

itself in an striking

A striking.

He will sometimes paint his nails to match his outfit, on special occasions, though he rarely has time.

Get rid of the first ...

You missed something from my prior critique, but it was small so I just fixed it myself. You're good to go.

APPROVED

Heya again, Starlet. Apologies for the delay, I had a lot of Life happening last week. Rozlyn is looking a lot better and a lot more readable but there's still quibbles. My comments are below:

light scarring on the outside of her fingers

The outside of her fingers? Like, her skin? Yeah, I'd hope ...

Bump since Beel's profile is now in the queue. (NOT APPROVED THOUGH SO THINGS ARE SUBJECT TO CHANGE!)

Name: Charity "Beelzebub" Smith
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Grade: 12
School: Southwest Red Rock High School
Hobbies and Interests: Guitar, Weightlifting, Punk Music, Punk Fashion, Satanism, Anarchism, Fighting, Recreational Crimes, Guinea Pigs

Appearance: Charity—or "Beelzebub" as she prefers to ...

Heya NoLife! I'm the staffer that has Lily. Unfortunately, she is DENIED pending some edits and fixes. Despite her history of fighting being a tad extreme for a profile, you mostly manage to keep plausible deniability for it, so I think that's mostly fine, but she's got a fair number of other issues ...

Heya Starlet. Welcome to SOTF! I'm the staffer that has Rozlyn. Unfortunately, she's currently DENIED pending some changes and rewrites.

The main issue with Rozlyn's profile, which I will get into in detail later on in this, is that the profile is written in a very... narrative fashion. While ...