No fancy preamble this time, let's just get to it!

Can we get a bit more desciption on his eyes - are they large, medium? Does he have heavy eyelashes?

For the second time, this has not been added.

Juan’s nickname of Juanito is the way his parents called him since he was a little kid. Other ...

Hey, it didn't take a month this time! APPROVED

Okay, let's do this.

She has high rounded cheekbones, large hooded warm brown eyes, and a Nubian nose.

"Nubian" should be capitalized.

Ivy will respond to either name, but it is rare for Ingrid to be used.

Does she go by Ivy at home, or just at school?

A number of the closer friends she ...

Took a while to dot the i's and cross the t's but you are good to go. APPROVED

Apologies for the wait. I'll be more prompt in addressing these things in the future, but there are still a large number of changes that have not been made. I will itemize them for you.

Additionally, what race/nationality is Juan?

This has not been added.

Can we get a bit more desciption on ...

A momentary pang of fear - had the jibe been too mean? - and then a sudden flood of relief as Charlie Girl laughed and dropped the facade. Zara felt instinctively that she'd passed some kind of test, albeit one whose intention and impact both remained murky.

Zara listened with genuine interest as ...

Applesintime, it is me, your nemesis: Orangesoutspace. Just kidding, it's me, Gundham. I'll be critiquing your profile today.

Overall, this is very well written. You've clearly done your homework with most of the fine details, but there are still a few minor grammar tweaks and one or two minor ...

Hello, it's me! Gundham! Here's a critique I did for you.

Ingrid is looking great, but she's Not Approved Yet pending a few minor grammar tweaks and one or two things that I'd like a bit of expansion on. Let's get to it!



Ingrid has a heart-shaped face with a gently pointed chin and low ...

Everything's good, far as I can tell. APPROVED

And just like that, you're Approved. Congrats!

It was twenty years ago today, on this very spot. A group of handlers was submitting profiles on this very website, when all of a sudden they were massacred by a rogue staff member. Some say that every year on the anniversary of that terrible day, you can still hear his voice. It absolutely doesn't ...

And you are APPROVED. Sorry for the wait!

Thank you for the corrections, and sorry for the wait time, this month has been a madhouse.

This should be the last round of edits, it's all minor stuff and everything else looks to be in order.

Helena enjoyed watching channels like Mother's Basement and Gigguk

There's an apostrophe in the ...

Hi there!

So, in looking over this profile again, a lot of the edits in the biography and the appearance section are still missing. As has been stated a few times both here and in chat, if you're having difficulties with this process, reach out to me, and I'll help you figure it out. That's what I ...

I threw a lot at you there, sorry about that. A few things slipped through the cracks and weren't tweaked, so fix these last little bits and you'll be free!

This was mainly because all the other football players were very buff and fit, and Chester decided he also wanted to be the same as them ...