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For a hot second, Amber was convinced that the bit was about to be stopped in its tracks, before it had even really begun. Hope seemed to be taking her request for a speech at face value, and of all the people to carry along a gag, Meggy - sweet and sincere as she was - seemed to be right at the ...

GWUH still cannot believe that was what I missed. Got that in now though!

Heya Dea! I'm preeeetty sure I've grabbed everything you asked for here, I'm definitely gonna yoink that disadvantage suggestion as well cause it's a great shout. Hopefully this should all be good to go!

((Amber Barnes, Pregame Start!!!))

She never thought she’d end up saying this, but Amber was really glad she’d spilled an entire glass of orange juice all down her front earlier that morning.

This had not, of course, been an intentional act, and it sure as sun up wasn’t about to become a regular ...

Name: Alejandro Garcia de Teresa Gonzáles
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Grade: 12th
School: Southwest Red Rock High School
Hobbies and Interests: Soccer, football, baseball, combat robotics, pool, collecting and sculpting with scrap metal, horror media

Appearance: Alejandro is a young Mexican ...

Updating due to recent info developing and rotating in my mind, as well as the newfound existence of these clubs - please could Alejandro also be added to the Horror Club and the Metalworking Club thank you!!!!!!!!

i've seen a car before, put me in coach

i mean, put me in car

i mean, uh, shit, uh-

Hey again! This time I did most of these edits on my phone! #myphone. That should at least get me an instant-approval on my next app I think.

Anyways, I've gone through everything listed here, fixing up the various spelling and grammatical errors (Google Docs actually told me that 'lipgloss' was ...

me when i keep neglecting to edit this because i've lost all track of when the initial critique was made


Anyway, I think I've gone through everything you've asked for here! I've done some clean-up work throughout, splitting longer sentences into two, getting rid of some unnecessary words and ...

Name: Amber Stephanie Barnes
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Grade: 12th
School: Southwest Red Rock High School
Hobbies and Interests: Soccer, tennis, digital art, tattoos, partying, video games, mobile games, collecting bottle caps

Appearance: Amber is a tall girl, standing at 6’0” flat. This does ...

WE'RE BEST FRIENDS

hoargh

So I said I would get around to responding to this thread when I was less sleepy. Totally forgot something; I'm always sleepy! Oops! Fortunately I got to play video game with my fiance today so I'm feeling MARGINALLY more alert!



Howdy, it is I, Magnum!


SO we've already discussed some ...

hey how's it going

I've got some characters planned for V9 believe it or not! Wow! Very unlikely to be taking more than 4 this go around, as the previous version very much proved that a full cast of 6 is Way Too Many to be writing with my current job! Please also be aware that, as always, there's ...

beyblade its cold outside